This week, Year 4 were visited by Mrs Thompson to help us create a fantastic piece of descriptive writing. Students were inspired by ‘The Lost Happy Endings’ and came up with brilliant ideas about how to describe the eerie forest our main character travelled through. After a first draft, we discussed ways to make our writing flow by using sentences that move our main character along on her journey. Our second drafts showed a lot of improvements, and many students were eager to share what they had created.

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